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  • WAR GAMES is out! Win a copy! Winner drawn 16 August!

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    Dear long-suffering and stalwart reader. Yes, you read that right. WAR GAMES is out, my very first release from my own press, Sandal Press. That link goes to the Sandal Press page, where you can choose an etailer, if that’s your heart’s desire. While I’m on Amazon, Smashwords and XinXii, I’m still waiting on Kobo. And it takes time for the electrons to propagate to such places as Sony, Apple and Diesel.

    With a new release comes the inevitable competition, which tweep @RowanLarke kindly jogged my neurons about. If you, kind visitor, would like a digital copy of WAR GAMES (in EPUB), you have two choices.

    Choice one is signing up for my newsletter. Just ask and you will receive.
    PROs: It’s free!
    CONs: I will be asking that you put a review up somewhere. Plus you have to put up with my bi-monthly rantings for at least one newsletter. And the August/September newsletter will be out at the end of this week, so you don’t have much time.

    Choice two is commenting on this post.
    PROs: Limited exposure to my rantings and no gentle reminders to put up a review. You have till the 15th to enter a comment on any of my blog posts.
    CONs: You have to think of something to say.

    The choice is yours.

    If you’re piqued, you can read the book’s Prologue and a bit of its background here. Meanwhile, I’m hard at work on the next two releases for this year and trying not to compulsively check Amazon/Smashwords every fifteen seconds.

  • Blog post delayed till Monday

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    Yes, once more Kaz has pulled the this-is-not-a-blog-post rabbit out of the hat. So, this is not a blog post. The real blog post will appear on Monday, which is the official launch date of WAR GAMES. Hint hint. Have a great weekend.

  • WAR GAMES ready for 1 August release! / Society-FAIL

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    Well, it’s been a long haul so far…and it isn’t over yet. BUT, I can tell you that WAR GAMES is on schedule for official release on Monday, 1 August. And the fully-edited Prologue is up at my site for your reading pleasure.

    Cover for War GamesThe main problem with telling you that it’ll be released on the first of August, however, is that it takes time for the uploads to propagate to various etailer sites, so I wouldn’t go looking for the book on the Monday, if I were you. Best to leave it a couple of days.

    By now, stalwart reader, you would know the history of this novel. It’s been more than two years in the making. The book has gone through increases and decreases and now seems to be settled happily at almost the 90,000 word mark. I’ve taken out scenes and fleshed out others and I’m pleased with the result.

    WAR GAMES is also important because it’s my first self-published title and the first release for my own micro-press, so I had to dot many more “i”s and cross many more “t”s to ensure that things fitted together well. But we’re not done. There are still other plans in the works, other books, other offers, other enhancements. I am the ultimate tinkerer.

    For now, though, looking towards the end of the month, it all appears doable. And, for that, I’m very happy.

     

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    I don’t always do this. In fact, I can’t remember ever putting a section break in my blog posts, but I had to share something with you. I was taking The Wast through English and he had to pick the appropriate verb in order to satisfy subject-verb agreement. (That is, single subject, singular form of verb; multiple subjects, plural form of verb, that kind of thing.) I won’t go through the exercise with you but I do want to share the output. A case of English-pass but Society-fail, if you will.

    Darren told Alan, “Walking is a good form of exercise. We have to exercise to stay healthy.”
    “You have been telling me that for a long time,” replied Alan, who is used to other activities like playing football. “Jenny and Liza were out walking yesterday when they were robbed. It’s really not safe to walk on your own.”
    Darren said, “They were foolish. They chose to walk at night. Plus, they were not paying attention to what was going on round them. And it’s not like they don’t know about safety measures. Whatever it is, everyone is responsible for his and her own safety. They should have been more careful.” *

    Of course Malaysia can’t be described as libertarian-leaning by any stretch of the imagination. But I’m sure the average Malaysian knows just how, um, hard-working the local police are. They are paid for with public money but, as you can see from the above passage, they are absolutely NOT responsible for public safety.

    I’m not sure what revolts me more about this passage:

    (A) The fact that women’s safety is so easily glossed over
    (B) The “blame the victim” mentality inherent in the piece
    (C) The absolution of police from any kind of behaviour to protect the public
    (D) The fact that two out of three authors of this Guide are women (see below)
    (E) The inculcation of contempt for women being woven into education from a tender age
    (F) The complete incomprehension of locals to the heinous nature of this drivel
    (G) All of the above

    With this in mind, I hope you have a  better weekend than me and I’ll catch you next week.

    * Taken from “Longman Essential English Form 2 Revision Guide” (2011) by Sheela Prabhakaran, Doreen Da Costa, K. N. Vasanthy

  • Interview at World SF blog

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    It never fails. There I was yesterday. I’ve got to get some writing done, I said to myself. And the only way I can do that is to unplug from the intertubes. But I also had a big post-weekend grocery shop to do. And The Wast had to go to the dentist.

    Poor mite. His baby teeth absolutely refuse to come out, even with his permanents erupting, so we had no choice but to take him to the dentist who, in the middle of asking him about his pets, yanked out both teeth with a deft twist of her dental pliers. Unfortunately, the teeth were on opposite sides of his jaw, so that meant difficulty chewing, copious bleeding, mournful looks…you know, the usual.

    Of course, whenever I unplug for a while, something happens. In this case, it’s an interview that Joyce Chng conducted with me for the World SF Blog. I talk about the kids, sf romance and my thoughts on motherhood.

    Many thanks to Joyce and Lavie Tidhar for this opportunity. If you’re on Twitter, you can follow Joyce at @jolantru and Lavie at @lavietidhar And if you’re interested in SF from non-US parts of the world, be sure to put the World SF blog on your reader.

  • Heading into holiday month

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    Even as I peer over my overheated monitor and into the middle distance, I see August looming with all its terrible potential. Mostly this means that everyone will be taking the month off and some of my favourite blogs will even * gasp * stop!

    Rest assured that I won’t be doing that in August, stalwart reader. Oh no, I’ll be starting that kind of shenanigans right NOW!!

    See, here’s the thing. I promised myself that I’d blog three times a week. Faithfully. And, with a few exceptions, I think I’ve held to that promise for well on four years now. With Cara d’Bastian joining the personalities in my head, I was still blogging three times a week…except it was Tuesdays at Cara’s and Wednesdays and Fridays here.

    Well I missed Wednesday, didn’t I? And that’s because I’m smack in the middle of starting up my self-publishing business. Just because WAR GAMES has come back from the editors doesn’t mean that I can just rest on my backside and do nothing. It’s been formatting, and signing contracts, and setting up accounts, and documenting everything somewhere. It’s been learning about Cascading Style Sheets, and relearning HTML and trying to get a handle on whether I should use Anthemion Jutoh together with, or instead of, jEdit, Sigil, Mobipocket creator, Adobe plug-ins…well, the list goes on and on.

    So, it’s time to make my annual hard decision and cut back this blog to once a week. Fridays. I’ll still be at Cara’s on Tuesdays but, the rest of the time, I’ll be working damn hard on other, background stuff. I may post at other times of the week if some startling news comes in but, other than that, it’s Fridays from now on.

    Have a good weekend and I’ll catch you next week.

  • New story in the works!

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    This is how my writing progress is looking:

    * Final Line Edits are complete for TAINTED LOVE, a story in the “Cloaks & Daggers” anthology, coming from Total-E-Bound in October.

    * WAR GAMES is still with CopyEd. I’m hopeful it’ll be back sometime this week. Still on track for an August release at this stage. When in August? Your guess is as good as mine considering this will be my first self-published novel.

    * THE CHECK YOUR LUCK AGENCY (by alter-ego Cara d’Bastian) is still with DevEd. With luck, I’ll get it back by the end of the month. Because I already know there’s impending structural reworking required, release for August is looking shaky. I may have to delay this one till September/October, just to make sure it’s in as good a shape as it can be.

    * And QUINTEN’S STORY is two-thirds finished at the rough draft stage and I’m currently in the middle of commissioning artwork for it.

    What is QUINTEN’S STORY? It’s pure space opera. There is a little bit of romance in this one, but don’t expect a traditional romance ending.

    Quinten Tamlan was once part of the ST Alliance and a thorn in the side of the Republic. With his partner, Kiel Souiad, they fought a courageous battle against the wrongs of human-led civilisation. Then something happened and both Quinten and Kiel disappeared from view. Seven years later….

    I started this one more than a year ago and it languished on my hard drive because I was trying to shove romance into it and couldn’t fit it in properly. Last month, I had an epiphany. If romance doesn’t fit neatly into the story, why put it in? Indeed. (I can be a bit thick sometimes.)

    I’m hoping this one will be out around November/December with a projected word count of approximately 65,000 words.

    For 2012, I’m hoping for inclusion in another TEB anthology, there are two Check Your Luck books on the cards, and I’ve got another space opera novel to work on, tentatively titled GENESIS. That one was originally contracted to a well-respected house but they gave me the rights back after rationalising some of their genre lines. Hey, it happens. I need to rip GENESIS apart and put it back together again so you won’t be seeing it before the end of the year.

    I don’t know what’s been happening out there in the intertubes but, over the past three months, I’ve almost doubled the number of subscribers for Cara d’Bastian’s bi-monthly newsletter. A nice surprise. If you’d like to join the (now delayed) party, you can sign up here.

    So that’s three self-publishing titles from me this year and, hopefully, three next year too. Wish me luck and have a good weekend.

  • My relationship with reviews

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    If you are a reviewer, and you think about how to couch your review, and you detail in plain language what works and what doesn’t, then you’ll be pleased to know that I take your criticisms to heart. In fact, I do more than that. Allow me to explain.

    In Enemy Hands was the first novel of mine that was published. Up till that time, my released stories were mostly novellas. For anyone who’s written both, you’d know that novels and novellas are two different kettles of fish. Now, with an author’s myopia, I thought I had written a good novel but, in fact, it had a number of flaws, flaws that were pointed out to me via several very good reviews.

    1) The mix of erotic romance with hard sf. I still have some people tell me that they think the mix works. I don’t think so and, obliquely, other reviewers don’t think so, so that’s going to be my default stance for future novels. If I’m writing hard sf, I’ll ditch the erotic rom elements.

    2) Internalisations and set-up. This one is a difficult one for the sf author. It’s not like I can ask a reader to go download a map of Slater’s End from Google and follow along from there. However, an author can go too far and I think I did that. So, lessons from readers for next time: fewer internalisations and cut back on all that set-up information.

    3) Pacing. This is tied to (2). I spent so much time explaining the Republic that my pacing was off. By the time I’d set up the world, more than half the novel had staggered past. Things only started to get good in the latter half of the book. This might be okay for Iain M Banks, but I’m not Banks. So no self-indulgent treatises.

    What was very interesting to me was that a friend of mine, who hasn’t read much modern SF and doesn’t have much interest in the internet to follow blogs and review sites (I know, it’s true though), read my novel and nailed every single one of the flaws as pointed out in reviews. Of course, I asked him to be my DevEd for future projects and, after a bit of cajoling and bartering, he agreed.

    When I decided to revamp War Games, I sat down with the criticisms of In Enemy Hands fresh in my head. I took a 102,000-word novel and cut it back to something like 82,000 words. Or, to put it another way, I threw away eighty manuscript pages. And do you know what? I like the result! The book is leaner and more focused and even DevEd is only muttering a bit rather than metaphorically throwing down a page and shouting at me.

    But, I couldn’t have done it without the time and effort of several reviewers. With that in mind, I’d like to offer a big thank you to:

    Black Sun Reviews
    Panic in the Lingerie
    Janicu’s Book Blog
    RhiReading
    Book Chick City

    If War Games is a better book than In Enemy Hands, it’s because of readers like you. Thanks for taking the time to help me.

  • Progress so far

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    By now, stalwart reader, you would have heard that I’m self-publishing my space opera romance, War Games. Here’s the update.

    War Games is currently being worked on by my Developmental Editor (known as DevEd from now on). He’s running late. I had hoped to have those edits back by now but he’s been swamped in his day job so I know the proper thing to do is to sit on my hands and not bug him.

    I also have my Copy/Line Editor lined up. Like DevEd, he works peripherally in literature but has a wonderful command of the (UK) English language and was intrigued enough by the first chapter I sent him to take on the task of editing the entire book. (He was terribly disappointed by the “high level” of errors he found in the first ten pages. One instance of improper usage (Americanism), three outright mistakes and two other recommendations on rephrasing! He was appalled, I was delighted, but it’s going to be a roller-coaster of a ride, of that I’m in no doubt.)

    You’ll notice that neither of my editors are genre editors. I picked them because they both have an eclectic view of fiction that doesn’t draw lines between literature and genre or even within genres themselves. Because they don’t have extensive knowledge of particular genre tropes, they are more likely to step on the brakes when something is not explained as well as it should have been rather than just accept a particular shorthand and move on. (I like that they ask, “Why?” a lot.) Given a choice, I always prefer an editor who is able to offer a different perspective.

    While I wait on DevEd and War Games, I’m working on the second-draft edit of alter-ego Cara d’Bastian’s first book, The Check Your Luck Agency. This will be the start of a paranormal series set in south-east Asia and featuring a coloured (Eurasian) protagonist. Cara has her own blog here, which she/I updates every Tuesday. If you’d like to hear more of The Check Your Luck Agency, please consider signing up for the bi-monthly newsletter. We’d be most grateful! :)

    You might also like the post that’s coming out on Tuesday on Cara’s blog. It concerns electrical storms in Malaysia.

    I have contracted one story, Tainted Love, to an upcoming Halloween anthology from Total-E-Bound and am plotting out both a short thriller for a 2012 anthology (I dreamt the first scene, would you believe?) and Book 2 of the Check Your Luck series, tentatively titled “Return of the Hantu”. “Hantu” is the Malay word for “ghost”. And there’s another SFR in the works too (set back in the Republic universe), so the rest of 2011/2012 should be busy and, I hope, productive.

    Have a good weekend and I’ll catch you next week.

  • New contract!

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    In order to grow (build? mutate?) some paranormal chops, I decided to write a short urban fantasy for an anthology. What I like about anthology specifications is that they force me to focus. This anthology is due for release on Halloween. Any romance is allowed as long as it has vampires in it! LOL

    Oh my, was my first thought. I hadn’t ever thought of writing a vampire story. In fact, vampires aren’t even my favourite paranormal creature, what with them being all sparkly and sun-resistant nowadays. Hmmmmm. Tackling a topic like this, especially if it comes from left field, is very useful because it gets you out of your comfort zone. I love writing science-fiction so of course it made sense for me to tackle a contemporary vampire fantasy. How else can you improve as a writer if not by tackling challenges?

    TAINTED LOVE is about a vampire. And a human. And a grudging relationship they build. Here’s the blurb:

    Bryce Craven is different but, until he meets Cleo, he doesn’t realise how different he really is.

    As a serial killer stalks the streets, the city is in terror. People stay home, afraid to venture out in the dark hours lest they too are discovered, murdered and drained of blood.

    But one person who isn’t afraid is Bryce Craven. He seeks a woman. A special woman. And he won’t rest until he finds her and she delivers to him his heart’s desire. Only her. Only him. And the blood that courses through both their veins.

    Of course, blood doesn’t really course through veins, it courses through arteries. It just gets pushed along in veins, but “And the blood that courses through both their arteries” just doesn’t cut it, does it? So I’m sticking with the coursing-through-veins thing for now.

    The ink is still wet on the contract so no first chapter for at least another couple of months, but at least you know I’m not just concentrating on this self-publishing malarkey.

    The paranormal bug…I haz it.

  • Competition: Sexy Scavenger Hunt

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    Wow, this is a good one! As part of the Sexy Scavenger Hunt to celebrate the release of SFR anthology, “Seeing Stars” from Total-E-Bound, four of the anthology authors are giving away a digital prize pack of great books! All you have to do is answer four simple questions and you’re in the draw. The winner gets:

    • a copy of the “Seeing Stars” anthology from Sophie Angerming, featuring stories by Lisabet Sarai, Justine Elyot, KS Augustin, Buffi BeCraft, Lizzie Lynn Lee and Sophie Angerming
    • a copy of the “Master Me” anthology from Justine Elyot, featuring stories by Elizabeth Coldwell, Jane Davitt, Justine Elyot, Trina Lane, Lisabet Sarai and Charlotte Stein
    • a copy of the “Cougars & Cubs” anthology from KS Augustin, featuring stories by Ashley Ladd, KS Augustin, Mia Watts, Catherine Chernow, Elizabeth Coldwell and Imari Jade
    • a copy of “Truce of Trust” from Lisabet Sarai

    That should be enough stories to keep you satisfied, for a little while at least! :)

    What do you have to do to win?

    Easy! Answer four questions and email your answers to CONTEST [at] LISABETSARAI [dot] COM We’ll even give you the website details where you can find the answers

    Q1) Lisabet Sarai has a story in a recently released steampunk anthology. What’s the name of that anthology? (http://www.lisabetsarai.com)

    Q2) What is the title of Justine Elyot’s story in the “Master Me” anthology? (http://justineelyot.com)

    Q3) KS Augustin has written for one other Total-E-Bound anthology. What is the name of that anthology? (http://www.ksaugustin.com)

    Q4) Captain Kate Thorn from the “Seeing Stars” anthology has a sister. What is the sister’s name? (http://www.sophieangerming.co.uk)

     

    Put your answers in an email with “Sexy Scavenger Hunt” in the Subject line and send it to CONTEST [at] LISABETSARAI [dot] COM for your chance to win!

     

    The competition starts TODAY! (9th May) and runs through to the 15th May and the winner will be announced here, there and everywhere! So get hunting, get your entries in by the 16th May and the best of luck!

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